இருள் மறைத்த நிழல் - 75

"இவ்வளவு அன்பு இருப்பவள், அப்படியும் என்னை விலகி விட தானே முடிவு செய்தாய்?" என்று நளந்தன் குறை போல் சொல்ல, "பின்னே, விலக முடியாதபடி கட்டி போட்டுவிட்டு என்றெல்லாம் வெறுப்பாக சொன்னீர்களே.. விலகாமல் என்ன செய்வதாம்?" என்றாள் மிதுனா.

"'Reading between lines' என்று கேள்விப்பட்டதில்லையா? அப்படியே  'literal'-ஆக அர்த்தம் செய்து கொள்வதா? உன் காதலால் என்னை விலக முடியாதபடி கட்டி போட்டு விட்டு, போகிறேன் போகிறேன் என்று சொல்கிறாயே என கோபித்து கொண்டேன்"  உல்லாசமாக சிரித்தான் நளந்தன்.

நளந்தன் மேல் தனக்கிருக்கும் ஆதிக்கம் பெருமிதம் தந்தாலும் அவனை வருத்தி விட்டோமே என்று மனம் வருந்த, "நீங்கள் தான் உங்களை போட்டு அப்படி வருத்தி கொண்டீர்களே. தாத்தாவிற்கு கொடுத்த வாக்கிற்காக, மெல்லவும் முடியாமல்  விழுங்கவும் முடியாமல் தவிக்கிறீர்களோ என்று.. உங்களுக்காக தான், நந்தன்.. நான் விலகி விட நினைத்தேன். உங்களை பிரிவது உயிரை பிரிப்பது போல தான் இருந்தது." என்று மனதை மறைக்காமல் சொன்னாள்.

அவள் விரல்களோடு விரல் பொறுத்தி விளையாடி கொன்டிருந்த நளந்தன், "அது அன்று பால்கனியில், நான் தவித்த தவிப்பு வேறு.. உன்னை விலக்கமுடியாததால் வந்த தவிப்பு" என்று மென்னகை புரிந்தான்.

அவள் வியந்து பார்க்க, "மெய், மது. உன் மனம் குணம் எதையும் ஆராயாது, முட்டாளின் சொர்க்கத்தில் இருந்தேனும் உன்னை காதலிக்க நான் முடிவு செய்த நேரம் அது. அப்போது போய் நீ வந்து தாத்தாவிற்கு கொடுத்த வாக்கை மதிக்க வேண்டாம், உங்களை மணக்கும் எண்ணமே எனக்கு இல்லை என்றெல்லாம் நீ சொன்னாயா! எனக்கு வந்தது பார் கோபம்" என்று கண்களில் சிரிப்பு தேக்கி சொன்னான்.

"அன்று வேலையே ஓடவில்லை. ஓடி வந்து பார்த்தால், அஞ்சியது  போலவே அம்மிணி ஆளையே காணோம். அன்று எப்படி மனம் துடித்தேன் தெரியுமா?! பெட்டியை தூக்கி கொண்டு கதவருகில் நீ நிற்கையில் என் இதயம் நின்று துடித்தது. உன்னை என்றுமே இழக்க நான் தயாரில்லை என்று அப்போது தெள்ளதெளிவாய் தெரிந்தது. எப்படியோ உன்னை நிறுத்தி வைத்தேன். எப்படியும் உன் மனதை மாற்றிவிடலாம் என்று நான் நம்பிக்கையோடு இருந்த சமயம் சுகந்தன் நர்ஸ் உனக்கு போன் செய்த விஷயத்தை என்னிடம் சொல்ல, சுபலாவின் சதி வெட்டவெளிச்சம் ஆனது. உன் தாத்தா பற்றிய சேதி உனக்கு ஊர் சென்ற அன்றே கிடைத்திருந்தால், உன் எண்ணமெல்லாம் உன் தாத்தாவை சென்றடைவதில் தானே இருக்கும்? சுபலா சொன்னபடி திட்டம் தீட்டுவது எப்படி ஆகும்? மதூ..உன்னை அநியாயமாக வறுத்தேடுத்தேனே என்று அன்று ரொம்பவும் நொந்து போனேன்.. எங்கே என்னை வெறுத்துவிடுவாயோ என்று ஒரு கலக்கம். உன்னை கை நீட்டி அடித்து.. 'டி' போட்டு பேசி.. எனக்கே என் மேல் வெறுப்பாக இருந்ததே!"
மனம் தாளாதவன் போல, அன்று கை தடம் பதிய அறைந்த அவள் கன்னத்தை, இன்று மயிலிறகால் வருடுவது போல அத்தனை மென்மையாய் வருடினான்.

அந்த கைகளில் இதழ் பதித்த மிதுனா அவன் கலக்கம் தீர்ப்பவள் போல அவனோடு வாகாக ஒண்டி அவனின் கன்னத்தோடு கன்னம் வைத்தாள். மூன்று நாள் அலைச்சலில், ஷேவ் செய்யப்படாத அவன் தாடி இதமாக குத்தியது. இயற்கையிலேயே நேர்த்தியாய் , டிசைனர் 'Stubble' போல வளர்ந்திருந்த அந்த தாடியில் விரல்களை ஓட்டிய மிதுனா, "ஒரு பெண்ணை கை நீட்டி அடிப்பது தவறு தான் என்றாலும், அன்றைக்கு நீங்கள் என்னை அடித்ததை நான் ஆணாதிக்கமாக பார்க்கவில்லை. அது என் மேல் நீங்கள் வைத்த 'அன்பின் ஆதிக்கம்'. நம் அன்பு பொய்த்து விட்டதோ என்று பொங்கிய உங்கள்  கோபத்தின் ஆதிக்கம். சில நேரங்களில் கோபமும் அன்பின் வெளிப்பாடு தானே. நேசிப்பவளிடம் கோபத்தை காட்டாமல் வேறு யாரிடம் காட்டுவார்களாம்? 'டி' போட்டு பேசியது கூட ஒரு உரிமையில் தானே! அன்பின் அடிப்படையில் வந்த உரிமை. அது எனக்கு ஆனந்தமே." என்று மனமுவந்து சொன்னாள்.

வேறு சமயமென்றால் நளந்தனின் இயல்புக்கு, "ஆஹா, அடிக்க லைசென்ஸ் கிடைத்துவிட்டது." என்று விளையாட்டாய் ஏதாவது பேசியிருப்பான். ஆனால் இப்போதோ மிதுனாவின் மட்டற்ற அன்பு அவனை திக்கு முக்காட வைத்தது.

தொண்டையை செருமிக் கொண்டு, ஒரு கையால் அவள் கூந்தலை வருடியபடி பேசினான், " அப்போதெல்லாம் உன் கழுத்தில் நான் போட்ட இந்த சங்கிலி தான் எனக்கு ஆதாரம். அது உன் கழுத்தில் தொங்கும் வரை  உன் மனதில் எனக்கு இடமுண்டு என்று நம்பிக்கை வளர்ப்பேன். அந்த நம்பிக்கையில் தான் தாத்தாவிற்கு போன் செய்து, நான் சொல்லும் வரை ஊருக்கு திரும்ப வேண்டாம் என்று சொல்லி, நம் மனம் ஒன்றுபட இடையூறின்றி இருக்க எல்லா வேலையாட்களையும் நிறுத்தி, அதுவும் சரிவராது, ஒரு இடமாற்றம் உன் மனதை மாற்றுமோ  என்று தோன்ற, நிலம் அது இது என்று சொல்லி,  உன்னை இங்கே அழைத்து வந்து.." அவன் விவரிக்க விவரிக்க அவளுக்கு பயங்கர வியப்பாக இருந்தது.

"ராஜதந்திரமா?! " என்று கண் சிமிட்டி சிரித்தாள் மிதுனா. பட்டாம்பூச்சி போல படபடத்த அந்த கண்ணிமைகளில் மென்மையாய் இதழ் ஒற்றிய நளந்தன், "பின்னே, இப்படி எல்லாம் ராஜதந்திரம் செய்ததால் தானே இன்று இந்த நளமகாராஜாவுக்கு ஆள்வதற்கு இந்த அழகு ராஜ்யமும்,  ஆட்டி படைக்க இந்த ராஜ்யமே ராணியாகவும் கிடைத்தாள்!" என்றான்.

கண்கள் மின்ன சிரித்த மிதுனா, "அப்புறம் வேறு என்னென்ன ராஜதந்திரம் தெரிந்து வைத்திருக்கிறீர்கள்?!" என்றாள்.

"நிறைய இருக்கிறது, மானா!" என்றான் ஒரு மர்ம புன்னகையோடு.

"மானாவா?! " என்று அவள் வியந்து பார்க்க, "ம்.. மிதுனா, மானா, தேனா, மீனா, சோனா.. இப்படி உன்னை பல பெயர் சொல்லி அழைத்து வைத்தால், நான் நிம்மதியாக தூங்கலாம் பார்" என்றான் புதிராக.

"விளங்கும்படி சொல்லுங்களேன்" என்று மிதுனா சிணுங்க, "இப்படி தோன்றிய பெயர் எல்லாம் சொல்லி உன்னை கொஞ்சி வைத்து விட்டால் தூங்கும் போது எந்த பெண் பெயர் சொல்லி புலம்பினாலும், விஷயம் புரியாது நீயும் உன் பெயரை தான் அனத்துகிறேன் என்று நினைத்து கொள்வாய்..நமக்குள் சண்டை வராது பார்! நானும் எவள் பெயரையாவது தூக்கத்தில் உளறிவிடுவேனோ என்ற பயமின்றி நிம்மதியாக உறங்கலாம்" என்று சொல்லி குறும்பாக சிரித்தான்.

அவன் மார்பில் செல்லமாக அடித்தாள்  மிதுனா.
"ஆளை பார்! 'ஒருத்தியிடம் காதல் என்று உணர்ந்தால், அதன் பின் ஏகபத்தினி விரதன் நான்' என்று சொல்லியது மறந்து போச்சா?" ஒரு விரல் நீட்டி அவள் பத்திரம் காட்ட,
"அப்படியா சொன்னேன்?! நன்றாக யோசித்து பார், 'ஏகப்பட்ட பத்தினி விரதன்' என்று சொல்லியிருக்கப் போகிறேன்!" என்று வாய் விட்டு சிரித்தான்.

நளந்தனின் அந்த மாயச்சிரிப்பில் எப்போதும் போல மனம் லயித்த மிதுனா அவனின் முகவாய் வெட்டை ஒரு விரலால் மிருதுவாக வருடி பார்த்தாள். வருடிய விரலுக்கு ஒரு ஈர முத்தம் தந்து, பின் தன் இதழ்களை அவளது கன்ன கதுப்புகளுக்கு குடியேற்றிய நளந்தன் மெதுவே குனிந்து ஆசையோடு அவள் கழுத்து வளைவில் முகம் புதைத்தான். சில நிமிடங்களுக்கு பின்னர் பிரம்ம பிரயத்தனப்பட்டு தன்னை கட்டுக்குள் கொண்டு வந்த நளந்தன், நாணத்தால் செங்கொழுந்தாக சிவந்து தலை கவிழ்ந்து நின்ற மிதுனாவின் முகம் நிமிர்த்தி, "நம் தேனிலவு இந்த கிராமத்தில் தான், மது." என்று சொல்லி கள்ளச்சிரிப்பு சிரித்தான்.

நளந்தனின் அந்த மோகன சிரிப்பில் இமைக்க மறந்த மிதுனா உள்ளம் கொள்ளை போனாள்.

நிழல் நிஜத்தை நிறைத்தது
~ முற்றும் ~

216 comments:

  1. Very gud romantic story then.. Pls do continue writing..

    Ramya

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  2. Thanks Ramya.. Just curious, Do I know u?... I know a Ramya.. Thats why..

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  3. No pa.. U dont knw me.. I came to ur blog for some kathrikkai curry dish then saw this story and followed it..

    there is a blog for new writers.. if u r interested u can post ur story there..

    there are lot of ppl to encourage u thr..

    amutha.wordpress.com

    u can try that..

    Regards,
    Ramya

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  4. Hi Ramya,

    That is very sweet of you. :-) U r so friendly.
    Thx for info abt amutha's story blog. Will try it out.

    Actually, I had been there in search of ramanichandran novels yrs back. :-)

    Pls pass on the word abt this story too to ur interested friends.

    Thanks,
    Thena

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  5. Will surely do..

    me too.. I was thr n RC groups.. thn joined bck wrk again.. after an year I m visting that blog.. there are so many young writers whose books are brilliant..

    there are many ongoing stories too..

    whn r u starting ur nxt story??

    Regards,
    Ramya

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  6. Next story.. not real soon, Ramya. I have many story plots brewing. But not in a mood to write for quite sometime.. one blue moon day i would rise up again and start pouring out! :)

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    1. Hi Thena,

      I am RC madam's big fan. I read ur "Irul maraitha Nilal"....

      It's really wonderfull. Solla varthai illa romba azhaga varthagal use pannerukenga.

      Ungalil naan RC madama patha mathere iruku....

      chance illanga really good. is this ur 1st story?

      I have 2 doubt in this story:( Na understand pannathu correcttanu therela)

      1. Mithuna letter collect panna Nalanthan room ponapa Nalanthan saving cream ma towella thodaikaratha sollitu, Mithuna velela porapa 'After shave lotion' smell varamathere ezhutherukenga....

      2. Subhala Bathriya 2nd roomla poga sonna, 3rd roomla poitanu subhala Bathriya theturatha varum.... but avan ulla ponathum Subhala thaan lock pannerupa illaya.....


      other than this 2 everything is perfect... I like it very much I said to my hubby also...

      Even he also teased me and asked me to try to write story..... couple of days I'm writing my 1st story...

      appo thaan unga storyya pathathum asanthutein....

      chance illa, azhaga words use pannerukanga but my storyla words lam reapeat aguthu thenu azhaga ezhutherukanganu 3 days sa ungala pathe thaan sollitu irunthein...

      Thanks,

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    2. A beautiful story. Every sentences is amazing!

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  7. waiting 4 tht blue moon day to come soon.. :)

    I saw ur lakeside cottage painting it was awesome ..

    hw come u r having multi talent???

    giv me some tips for painting too..

    Regards,
    Ramya

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  8. Hi Ramya,

    U put a smile on my face Today!

    Blue moon day.. :-) I too wish it comes soon.

    Along with regular routines, other things are taking priority though.. like I am choreographing Vijay's "Vadaa Vadaa Thozha" song from Sivakasi, for a group of kids - Annual day function at school.

    And. my interest is shifting to Piano.. Also Mithuna & Nalandan are still lingering in the mind.. need some time to clear them up so I can start with a clean slate. else it will be irul maraiththa nizhal - part 2 ! ;-)

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  9. Ramya, As for painting tips, Send me ur mail id separately through the same comment form. I shall just make note of your id and NOT publish your comment so your id wont be exposed. And we can take it from there via mails.

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  10. ey thena thts so nice of u.. ***** is my id..

    So u do hav talent in dancing and piano too.. thts so gud.. upload the dance video after the annual day.

    is thr any other field u haven't tried yet :D ..

    I was wrkin 4 **** for past *** yrs.. hw abt u?? saw tht u r J2EE professional in ur profile.. :)

    Regards,
    Ramya

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  11. I have sent a private mail to ur id.. :) Good to be in touch..

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  12. hi the story is good.... keep the stories coming....liked the way u have written...

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  13. Hi Thenu,

    you have written such a thorough story!!! Guruvai-e minjiya sishyai aagi vittergal.

    Ofcourse RC story maadhiri irundhaalum, you ahve actually written at par or even better than her.

    the places where you uave quoted mahabaratham etc... are very nice ( ambai standing amidst Beeshmar...)

    'Paazhum kinaru' was the only sp. mistake i could remember.

    romba romba nalla ezhudhi irukeenga. Very good.
    continue to write,

    I cam to your blog when 'KG' dropped ina word in Amutha's blog about your story.

    Pl. continue to write.

    very good work!!! a totally appreciate it!! evvalo time aachcho porumaiya type adikka!!! hats off!!

    regards,
    Raji.

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  14. Oops i almost forgot to add this - the sketches that you have used in the story are so good.
    :D
    -Raji

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  15. Hi Jingle/Raji,

    Very glad to read your heartfelt comments and sincere feedback. :-) Pls convey my thanks to KG, I don't know KG thats why.. Offlate I find more readers to this blog, I think it is becoz of word of mouth like friends like you & KG. Thanks for that.
    It took me about 4 months to get the story to a shape - but I was not doing it full time. :-)
    Shall correct that typo too next time I come across it.

    Bye for now, Raji!!

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  16. Hi Thenu,
    Very well written. Great writing!
    RC story padicha maadhiriye irundhadhu.
    Midhuna and Nalandhan lingering in my mind too.
    Why dont you publish it as a book?
    Eagerly waiting for your next story.
    Keep it up :)

    Regards,
    Vidhya.

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  17. Hi Thena,

    superb story!!! onra iranda ellam sollavae post pannina idam pothuma :lol: ...... well written thena and the charcters of Nandhan and Midhuna :P not only them rest of all u potrayed very well . keep going we r waiting to read more
    from u .
    Thank U once again very nice story :) .

    Thanks to Kg also :)

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  18. Hi thena,
    Well written.
    Very nice story.Like it very much.After a long time felt like reading RC mam's story.
    Excellent and waiting for more.

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  19. Thanks, Dr.Vidhya, Arasi & Kalpana! unga comments ellaam padikka romba santhoshamaa irukku. :-) Next kathai eluthinaa kndippa solren. Love you guys!
    -Thena

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  20. This sathyav
    I got ur blog address from amuthas blog (thanks to Kg to recommened a wonderful site )..
    Very nice love story ...
    Flow of the story was good ..
    Drawing is very beatiful ..
    waiting for next update

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  21. Hi Thena,

    I really liked your story. Its been long time i stopped reading books after my girls born. I know one Thenu from Kovai friend. I don't know whether u r that thenu, I think her dad is teacher. I am also from Kovai. Do you know SSR uncle by any ways? his sons names are Ravi and Kathir. I am kathir's friend, Mala.

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  22. Dear Mala,

    Thanks for the comment!
    Sorry yaar.. I am not that Thenu. But I know a Mala with a brother Prabakar. Funny, right.. :-)
    Well, Thanks for stopping by, Mala.

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  23. Hi
    Padithu mudithuten.Arumayaga eluthi irukeenga.Super ponga.Thodarnthu eluthunga.

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  24. Thanks very much, Viji! :-)

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  25. romba nalla irunthathu.ungal yeluthu pani thodara vaalthukkal.

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  26. Nice story. Congratulations! God bless you.

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  27. Then
    Ennoda oru commentuku neenga reply panave illa?

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  28. Appadiya Viji.. sorry.. enna comment athu? whereabouts-a? privacy concern.. illa vera ethavathaa? sollunga..

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  29. Hi Thena..

    Wonderful story..i enjoyed alot reading it.keep up ur gud work..do write more dear..:)

    Eagerly waiting for ur nex story..

    Best wishes from,
    Yaso

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  30. Hai Thena

    Wonderful story .... yeppadi Rc mam bookai ore naala padichu mudikkanum aravam erukumo athey mathiri.. laptop vittu nakara mudiyalai avvalavu nalla erunthathu unga story... eppo next story start panna poringa..waiting for ur next story...

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  31. Iniku than unga novel rendavathu thadavai padichen.Romba nala iruku marupadiyum padicha kooda ;-)

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  32. Hi Thena...

    Very nice story..romba nalla konduponinga...as the places u mentioned are known to me it increased my intrest..Not able to stop in the mid.. Thanks a lot..Waiting for ur next story..

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  33. hai Thena......

    wow... awesome... really superb story... im a vry gr8 fan of RC mam... i felt like readng her story itself.. really gr8 work... plz release it as a book so i can add it in my collections... many ppl try 2 write lik RC mam bt u proved it u hve the talent in u... do continue ur work.. i expect ur nxt story eagerly... and ofcourse ur paintings r A1.. i used 2 do pencil sketching only.. bt hadnt tried with oil paintings.. u r multi talented... i shld really congrats u for ur talents.. continue ur works u hve many fans so dnt make us wait 4 a long time
    wishes frm
    divya

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  34. Wow! Really great.. I started reading this novel yesterday afternoon.. Couldn't stop and finished it by 2:40 AM. Pls. keep writing. You should contact 'Arunodhayam' (who generally publishes all RC's novels
    ) and publish this novel. Pls. share the next one with us..

    Regards,

    Vidyaa

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  35. hai Thenu,

    Thanks for giving us a great story. It made me fixed with the computer till the end. I was not able to do any work till i finish reading the entire story.
    Kudos for ur effort. Expecting more stories from you.
    The pencil sketching was also very good.

    Keep writing & best wishes
    rajee

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  36. Hi Thenu,

    This is sashi,you have written Wonderful Romantic story.Is it your first novel?. Hope you start the new novel soon.

    wishing you good luck with your next novel
    Sashichandru

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  37. Hi Thena,

    Wonderful Story....i enjoyed every bit of it.....rc maam novel padicha triupthi kedachudhu.....thanks a lot dear....do write more....when is your next story? title decide panniyacha?

    Bye
    priya

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  38. hi thenu,
    i like this story very much, it is very nice story like RC, UB, JS, KJ novels.
    keep writing
    kavi

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  39. was searching for a good romantic story and landed up here....so good....keep it up.i think rc madam will retire soon.i believe that u r there to replace her.Plz continue writing....publish 'irul maraitha nizhlal' as a novel.

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  40. it was a really nice novel...i enjoy reading RC madam movel n i've to say tat i enjoyed ur novel as much as i enjoyed her's...i think u should publish this novel=)
    waiting to read ur other novels=)

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  41. hi Then,

    Last week I read your novel...too too superb... I lost myself... U will not beleive how I read it without stopping.. Actually I was supposed to prepare for an interview... just for bit of relaxation I started to read your novel... but could not stop reading your novel till 2.30 AM in morning. Finally I didnt prepare for interview..and I didnt clear it :).. But I have hopes, I have again started preparing for my interview. I will get thorugh soon in another comapany... Your novel was binding me to it very tightly.. I couldnot prevent myself from reading.. such an wonderful novel.. Thanks Then... Please do keep writing and send me the link fo your new novel.. eagerly waiting for it... my Id is kokila.arunachalam@rediffmail.com... ur writing skills and handling of "Tamizh words" were too good. My hearty wishes for you and your novel.. keep writing and keep posting...

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  42. Hi Thenu,

    I used to be amazed at your painting talent (if u remember I left a comment a year before).. Today I was searching for some kathirikai dish and landed here.. And I read the whole story in one sitting!!! Wow, simply superb!!! I have not read RC's novels, though I have heard so much.. I am sure the author will be proud to see such a wonderful effort from a fan!

    Keep up the good work.. Will wait for your next novel!

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  43. தேனா,

    ரொம்ப நல்லா இருந்ததுங்க உங்க ஸ்டோரி... ஒரே ஸ்ட்ரெச்-ல முடிச்சுட்டேன்..
    எல்லோரும் சொல்லுறதை தான் நானும் ரிப்பீட் பண்றேன்..நீங்க ஏன் இதை ஒரு புத்தகமாக வெளியிடக் கூடாது?
    கதைய நல்ல flowல கொண்டு போயிருக்கீங்க.. ரொமான்ஸ், செண்டிமெண்ட்ஸ், சோகம், கேலி, கிண்டல் எல்லாம் கரெக்ட்டா கலந்து ஒரு சூப்பர் கதை.. Yours is similar to RC.. rather better than some of RC's novels... Continue with your efforts..
    உங்களுடைய அடுத்த கதைக்காக ஆவலுடன் காத்திருக்கிறேன்..

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  44. Hai thenu,
    After my night study my conclusion is wow!!!!!.
    ur writing can make a feel .if anyone said it is ur first novel -it is very hard to believe in it yaar.a very warm welcome to story line and eagerly waiting for the second one...from ur blogs it is well known that multi talented people can hardly get few hours to spend free but do think about these crazy readers too...
    cheers for the first one..
    regards,
    gowrisuresh.

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  45. Hi Gowri!! Thanks ma. Your's is the first comment I read as soon as I got up - very happy. Sure I shall work on my 2nd soon. :-)

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  46. Hi Thenu,
    I am sasi.Ur novel is really superb.This is like RC,UB, KJ novels and very interesting.Can I download this novel?What is ur next novel?I am eagerly waiting for that.I am also rcs big fan.I collected near 150 rc novels .

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  47. Hi Thenu,

    Absolutely brilliant.I am literally crying while reading some chapters..(nenju adachituchu:)
    chapters 69 and 72 are marvellous.Excellent narrations.
    1 small request,please add more romance parts like 69th chapter in your next novel.I simply loved it.Your writing resembles chitrabala more than ramanichandran in my opinion:)

    காதலை சொட்ட சொட்ட தந்த தேனுவிற்கு என்
    நெஞ்சம் நிறைந்த பாராட்டுக்கள்.

    I usually comes to your site for receipes..surprisingly, you gave me double delight.
    Thanks a ton for this wonderful Novel.keep up ur goodwork and please realease ur next novel soon..coz, I finished reading all novels of ramanichandran/chitra bala/jaisakthi..nothng left.Hope you understand my feelings better...

    Please put an end to my novel (romantic novel)craving!!All the best.

    -Divya
    Colorado.(Denver)

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  48. Hi Thenu,
    I googled for some recipies and found your site. I have enjoyed many of your wonderful recipies. From there I got into 'Irul Maraitha Nizhal'. You are an excellent writer. I see from your profile that you are a SW Engineer. I have no doubts that you would succeed in everything you try. You probably would succeed as an Industrialist, as an outstanding, award winning author as well as a painter. All in one life time. You are very talented and May God Give you everything you desire. I have enjoyed your recipies and your Novel.

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  49. Dear dhena, your novel is very much interesting.Please write more.
    with love
    geethrani

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  50. I am serious fan of Rami Chandran...u too have the style of this famous writer. Do write more...

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  51. wonderful one:) u r really a genious:) does'nt seem to b ur frst story:)do continue givin some romantics like this:)u ve been another novelist n my favourites list:)

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  52. chanceless i like ur story lot...waiting to read ur next story..i have read almost all rc novels and came is search of some new novels..appa thaan unga story padichaen really..RC novel vida romba romba like pannaen..tell me when you'll write ur next novel....

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  53. Hi Thenu, This is Kavitha. I am just going to sleep now mid night(?) 4.00 after completing this story.

    Romba nalla irunthathu. I used to think that writer Uma Balakumar follows RC's style. You too have the same style. But besides that you had your own style too.

    Please keep writing.

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  54. @Kavitha, Good night. LOL. Thanks so much for the FB and lovely words!! :)

    @Chitra,Geetha, Kausalya, anonymous1, anonymous2..
    Thanks ma! :)

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  55. @Divya,
    Thanks pa. sure more romance like 69.. noted!! ;)

    @Shrisu/Sasi
    I shall see how to get the download possible.. for now, you can save it as webpage.. :)

    Thanks for FBs friends.. it means a LOT!!! :)

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  56. Great work.U have the wonderful writing skills.Enjoyed reading.Keep rocking Thenu.

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  57. hi thena,

    wonderful story, its like a RC mam story,

    worderful writting, we are waiting for next novel.

    u start ur story in this blog many girls are writting her owm indivual story.

    http://amuthas4ui.wordpress.com/

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  58. To be honest when I started reading the story, I was not expecting 50% maturity in your writing.

    But you have scored 99.99999% (6sigma) except very few spelling mistakes. zha, lla, la.
    Many English words.. I may take it as a contemporary write.


    Kasthuri Sivaprakasam
    Perfect job done.

    As you know, I am not a kind of person who spent time on reading novels, you should pat on your back.. your story tied me in my chair for more than 4-5 hrs. No water..No food.. No (N)calls..:-) amid my 14-16 hrs hectic schedule.

    Thanks for the wonderful love story.

    Thenu, you really have good style in narrating the scene. After very long time, may be after ‘Alaipayuthey’ movie I liked your (egoistic) romance. Very nice flow. One chapter pushes to next chapter. That is the quality of good writer. You never seemed to be a first time writer in any of the occasion through out the flow all 75 are perfect.

    You are simply amazing Thenu.
    Keep it up.

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  59. Hi Thena
    Your first novel Irul Maraittha nizhal is awesome. Romba swarasyamaga irunthathu. I really enjoyed while reading. Nalanthan bike accident ennai romba gathi kalanga vaitthathu. antha neram episode end vera, aduttha episode padittha piragu than shantham aanean.
    keep it up nice story. Thank you verymuch.

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  60. Hi Thena
    This is Sangeetha Aswin.
    unga ezhuthukkal mighavum arumai.
    mithuna,nalandhan charcters are very nice
    keep it up ma
    Thanks for this nice novel
    pls continue ur writing

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  61. Hi Thenu
    This is Vaijayanthi.
    Ungaludaiya intha padaippu really superb.
    Mithuna & Nalandan iruvarum appadiye manasil idam pidithu vittarkal. Very nice story and realistic.

    Please start the next novel.
    Expecting another novel from you soon.

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  62. Very Nice story, Thenu. Your blogspot has found its way in my IE favorites. I enjoyed your story as much as I enjoy RC. Wish you the best of life.

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  63. very nice and intersting...i started at night..... next i put leave and cntinued thenu mam... really rc mam oda thaakam apdiye irundhudhu...no words to exprs...write more novels lik this .......i am eagrly waiting for ur next story...ok soon start writing...bye take care

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  64. தேனு,
    நிஜமா சொல்றேன், இந்த கதைய RC எழுதினதுனு என்கிட்ட யாராச்சும் சொல்லி குடுத்து இருந்தா அப்படியே நம்பி படிச்சு இருப்பேன் (Except for some english words here and there)... too good I say...
    Friends reading my blog always comment and tease me calling "RC clone", which ofcourse I accept happily as a compliment. Now, after reading your story, I was totally stunned. Right from names used in the story such as "sugavanam", "sugarthan", "subila", "nalandhan" all that so unique as I read in RC's books. Also the plots, usage of words, making the readers involve in the chacters all is amazing. My best wishes to you Thenu. Also, admired by your pencil sketches. Wow....I envy that talent in anyone as I can't put a single straight line in place...ha ha...
    I really enjoyed the story. Thanks for that
    Thanks to Priya akka and Anamika for referring to your page
    சீக்கரம் அடுத்த ஸ்டோரி ஸ்டார்ட் பண்ணுங்க
    நட்புடன்,
    புவனா (a) அப்பாவி தங்கமணி :)))

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  65. Thanks Banu, Narayani, Kasturio, Revathy, Sangeetha Aswin, Vaijayanthi, KJ, geetha and bhuvana!!! I am so moved by your comments.

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  66. Bhuvana, unga "appavi thangamani" nick veyr amusing. DH kitta solli solli sirichen. unique-a irukupa.. any story behind it? :) Unga blogs rc clone-a. naan kandippa pakanume. varen varen..

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  67. //Bhuvana, unga "appavi thangamani" nick veyr amusing. DH kitta solli solli sirichen. unique-a irukupa..//

    தேனா,

    அவங்க பேரை மாதிரியே அவங்க பதிவுகளும் uniqueஆ இருக்கும்.. படிச்சு பாருங்க.. she has a very good sense of humor and good writing style..

    பி.கு:
    btw, அவங்க சொன்ன அனாமிகா நான் இல்ல.. she is another blogger.. :)

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  68. anu.. ippidid ethanai anamica irukeenga? :) glad to see you again.

    ippo thaan bhuvana blog-la irunthu veliya varen.. I got to mail priya akka too.. OMG.. I cannot keep up with the mail speed... u guys are so friendly..

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  69. ஹிஹி.. எனக்கு தெரிஞ்சு நாங்க ரெண்டு அனாமிகா தான் :)

    // I cannot keep up with the mail speed//

    u definitely deserve more than this 'cos u have done an awesome job :)

    Catch u sometime later, thena.. its around 1 AM.. have to hit the bed.. :)

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  70. //அனு said - தேனா, அவங்க பேரை மாதிரியே அவங்க பதிவுகளும் uniqueஆ இருக்கும்.. படிச்சு பாருங்க.. she has a very good sense of humor and good writing style//

    Wow...thats a great compliment...thanks Anu...:)

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  71. Hi Thena,

    Very good story. Enjoyed your writing. A year back when i was searching for 'Kollu rasam' recipe, stumbled upon your recipe blog. Thanks for that authentic kollu rasam recipe. Today in tamil-ebooks.webs.com site 'Irul Maraitha Nizhal' novel was listed in RC mam’s novel section. I am huge fan of RC Mam so I clicked the link and found that it’s you again. Surprised. Very glad to know about your multi talent and time management skills. Keep writing. Hope the ‘Blue moon comes soon’ :)

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  72. Hi Thenu,
    I recently read your story.. that's too nice. It sounded almost like RC mam's story. I got a slight doubt during the climax of the story, only very slight. That is truly a great work from you. I have copied the book in ebook-reader and asked my mom to read, she is ardant fan of RC. Till now, she thinks I gave her a new RC book. :) Hats off to you.

    With Regards,
    Kavitha.K

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  73. Hi Anonymous & kavitha,
    Thanks very much!! :)
    Kavitha, Hope your mom likes it. Thanks pa.
    I wish to make a pdf of the novel - any ideas how to import a blog to pdf? :)

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  74. Hi...

    Actually i wont spend time in reading long novels.This is my first novel.I have read more than 20 times.
    the narration was simply superb.
    Waiting for your next novel.

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  75. hi....very very nice story.......i dont have words to comment.....hats off pa.........lovely story

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  76. hai very superb story thenu
    it is superb than rc`s wish you to have a bright future contiue writing and
    get blessing`s from rc mam
    i wish to have bee for me like this in future

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  77. Thanks anonymous friends! And to the friend who posted on april 20, did u actually mean "I wish to have a hubby like this in future"? If so, my hearty wishes ma. :)

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  78. april 20 reader
    yes dear thena you are right
    thanks for your wishes

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  79. Hi April20 Anonymous, very glad to hear bak frm u pa. Dont forget to invite me for the wedding. I shall make my virtual presence. :)
    Well u might be busy in நளந்தன் நமஹா , let me not disturb you pa. ;)

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  80. Hi Thena,
    Is it possible to send me the PDf file so that i can share with many of my friends who are not browsing.

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  81. I am yet to make one anonymous.. sorry abt that.. but someone has already posted a pdf in some site, unfortunately I do not remember the name..

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  82. It was a very romantic story. I was browsing the web for something else and by chance came upon your novel and was glad that I did so. There were many places in the novel where I laughed out loud, smiled. Thank you. Hope you write more like this.
    Kiki

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  83. Hi Thena,

    Such a wonderful story!!! Your words have the power to make one cry or laugh as you wish :) Wish you all the Best for all your future works!

    Regards,
    Gowri

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  84. Hi Thenu... Novel padichu mudikama yennala thungapoga mudiyala... now comment kudukama close panna mudiyala........ I have no words... still i'm feeling just "wow".

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  85. Thanks Nayagi. unique name. :)

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  86. Hi Thenu..lovely,romantic,good.....ihave no words to comment soooo.......good.hope you write more like this.All the best.
    subapratha

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  87. //Such a wonderful story!!! Your words have the power to make one cry or laugh as you wish :)//
    Thanks Gowri!! SO sweet of you to say that!

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  88. Thanks SubaPratha! Nice name!

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  89. Hello thenu.... I am truely, madly, deeply in lov with ur writing now... want to read more novels of urs. I finished this novel b4 3 months.. bt ippo comment panna piragu thaan i am getting satisfied....

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  90. Very very sweet of you, Iswarya! Your comments mean a lot to me. Thanks very much! :)

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  91. Excellent piece of work

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  92. Hi Thena
    Please please give us your new creation, just cant wait for it.
    Porumayai romba sodhikireenga, love your writing... Please do it on a regular basis. You already have thousands of fans engala ellam ippadi kaakka vaikalaama

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  93. Hi Thena,

    Anu here. Today I hav read this again (counting I don't remember, but must be 6th or 7th time I suppose). "YEGAPATTA PATHINI VIRADHAN" really nice one :-) :-).

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  94. loved every line of the story! cant believe its ur debut novel..samaikka kooda pidikkama ore moochil padithu mudithen..romba nanri!
    please do write more novels..all the best! apart from ur story ungaludaiya pencil sketches romba azhaga erunthathu...!

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  95. Hi Thena,

    The story is too too good. Got a feel of reading RAmani chandran and Jaya shakthi novel together. But I dint compare it with them. But felt so...
    I came to this blog in a random search but made it a book mark in my explorer.

    Too too good... My best wishes for you to continue your writing.

    Congrats and All the best again....

    Kind Regards,
    Dhivya

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  96. Loved your story... can't believe this is your first novel...Reading a tamil story (that too a good one) after a long time... Midhuna and Nalandhan are still lingering in my mind even after finishing the story. Thanks...

    I observed one thing... many of your characters names starts with 'S' like Santhanam, Sundaram, Sugan, Suguna, Sughirthan, Subhala... Just curious! :)

    BTW I liked your wonderful paintings too...I'm sure you're a person with multiple talents. Keep up the good work! Write more in the future... my best wishes...
    Irene

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  97. Hi Thena,How are you?When can we expect your next novel?
    Can I get your mail id pa....mine is bhanu.murugan@gmail.com

    Thanks and rgds

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  98. Hi Thenu,

    A very well written novel.. I have read so many novels of RC, Uma Balakumar and JeyaShakthi..now i am impressed with your writing too...

    you had me in tears in so many places..that's your victory..!

    Keep it up..all the best

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  99. Superb love story! romba nalla erundhadhu.seekirama adutha story ezhudhunga.

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  100. Hi Thenu,
    Superb story.A heart touching story also.Whenever i feel disturbed i start reading Ur story.
    When s your next story starts.
    Reg
    Kavi

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  101. Awesome story!!! Loved the way it is written.Waiting for more like this one...I read it in one go....Keep up the good work.

    Swetha.

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  102. hi thena
    very well written
    nicely taken the feeling of love thro out the story
    keep writing
    warn regards
    geetha

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  103. Hi thenu
    I loved reading your story.very nice.keep going....expecting lots more...
    Vaishu

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  104. ``hai thenu,very nice story.plz keep writing u have very good talent .waiting for ur next story....shanthi

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  105. sweeeeet love story nan idhuvaraikkum padichadulaye... pls continue writing.. i feel lucky to read ur story in the time waitin for my marriage

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  106. Hai thenu, very nice story.. Rc story mathiri ithuvum romanticka iruku.. & now ur also one of my fav authours.. I am eagerly waiting for ur next novel..

    By Shalini

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  107. Hello Thenu, iam sophia. Irul maraitha Nizhal very good work. It is a honey breeze novel like RC. Iam also very inspired by her romantic novels and started to write like you. My first novel mella vidinthathu iravu got published in KANMANI jan1,2012 named by Vijayadass.I liked ur way of writing very much. Nalla thamizh ezhuthu nadai.Keep writing. I wish for your all success

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  108. Hello Thenu, iam sophia. Irul maraitha Nizhal very good work. It is a honey breeze novel like RC. Iam also very inspired by her romantic novels and started to write like you. My first novel mella vidinthathu iravu got published in KANMANI jan1,2012 named by Vijayadass.I liked ur way of writing very much. Nalla thamizh ezhuthu nadai.Keep writing. I wish for your all success

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  109. Hello Thenu, iam sophia. Irul maraitha Nizhal very good work. It is a honey breeze novel like RC. Iam also very inspired by her romantic novels and started to write like you. My first novel mella vidinthathu iravu got published in KANMANI jan1,2012 named by Vijayadass.I liked ur way of writing very much. Nalla thamizh ezhuthu nadai.Keep writing. I wish for your all success

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  110. hi thenu...very nice work...actually i searched RC novel and got urs...i think RC oda aavi ungalukku ulla puhundhuruchi...please check some spelling mistakes..like kollai..and then..
    vidiya irave,tholaiya pagale than solvaanga...neenga vidiya pagale,tholaiya irave nu eluthi iruntheenga...just a friendly suggestion...thanks for the good novel....

    by praba

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  111. arumai..arumai..arumai...
    very nice ,i finish at strech

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  112. Hi thenu!!!
    Rely superb story great thoughts..
    Eagally expctng ur nxt stry.. Keep wrtng 4 us.. May god bless u..

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  113. Hi thenu!!!

    Amazing story... i miss Rc novels since i came to London for my higher studies... i am awaiting fo ur next one.. U r multitalented and u have impressed me to a gr8 extent...i have almost read it like 20 times and dis has become my fav one to accompany me wen i miss my home in India as i always sit wit RC novels der :) i wud like to keep in touch wit u.. can i know ur mail ID pls?

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  114. Thanks Divya, Kumu, Jesu, Kavi, Swetha, Geetha, Vaishu, Shanthi, Anonymous(must be a new bride by now.. congrats), Anusiya/Shalini, Sophia (I wish to read ur novel. pls share a link if you have. :) congrats for publishing it), Srikalamrali and Anonymous!!! I am overwhelmed by your response and wishes. THANKS!

    Thanks Irene! Your observation is right. My best friend's name starts with S and hence the dedication of names. :)
    Hi Banu & Aarthi, Sure we can be in touch. I have Bhanu's id.. but Aarthi I need urs, u can put it as a comment here and I shall note down your id but not publish your comment if you are concerned abt privacy.
    Thanks Praba for the notes on typos. :)

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  115. Thena,
    i read your irul maraitha nizhal. really impressed.
    can you send me the story in PDF format as i would like to share with friends Malaysia. please send to pbarath@maxis.com.my or sletchmy@gmail.com

    i in love with Nalanthan...

    Many thanks,
    Barathy

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  116. Dear Thena,
    inthe novel enakku Gethai pondrathu..nan innum inthe paathipilirunthu innum meelave illai..ennal mudiyathu..todarnthu tiruppi tiruppi padithu konde irrukiren. have you started your second novel? if yes, please help me to send to pbarath@maxis.com.my

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  117. "நம் தேனிலவு இந்த கிராமத்தில் தான், மது" enum varthai ennai sorgathil vambadiyage thalli vithane.

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  118. All the readers, once you've finished reading this story, Kindly listen to Panituli panituli from kanda naal mudhal movie.

    You'll be mesmerise....

    Barathy

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  119. Hi Thena,

    Nice one...Though the story line is the usual one,the way u wrote it is very good...
    This is better than RC novels..
    Keep writing...

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  120. Hi Thena,

    I am RC madam's big fan. I read ur "Irul maraitha Nilal"....

    It's really wonderfull. Solla varthai illa romba azhaga varthagal use pannerukenga.

    Ungalil naan RC madama patha mathere iruku....

    chance illanga really good. is this ur 1st story?

    I have 2 doubt in this story:( Na understand pannathu correcttanu therela)

    1. Mithuna letter collect panna Nalanthan room ponapa Nalanthan saving cream ma towella thodaikaratha sollitu, Mithuna velela porapa 'After shave lotion' smell varamathere ezhutherukenga....

    2. Subhala Bathriya 2nd roomla poga sonna, 3rd roomla poitanu subhala Bathriya theturatha varum.... but avan ulla ponathum Subhala thaan lock pannerupa illaya.....


    other than this 2 everything is perfect... I like it very much I said to my hubby also...

    Even he also teased me and asked me to try to write story..... couple of days I'm writing my 1st story...

    appo thaan unga storyya pathathum asanthutein....

    chance illa, azhaga words use pannerukanga but my storyla words lam reapeat aguthu thenu azhaga ezhutherukanganu 3 days sa ungala pathe thaan sollitu irunthein...

    Thanks,


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  121. Nyc story :) continue writingg!

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  122. Hi Thenu,

    this story was awesome.. Romba nalla ezzhuthi irukkeenga.. unga next storykku blue moon day vanthuducha?
    Keep writing :)

    Thanks

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  123. fantastic love Story jst love it..................

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  124. fantastic love story i love ths.....................hands of u

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  125. very very nice story

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  126. hi thenu..

    superb story.. so so romantic.. nice wordings carried the story very well.. keep on writing story lik this!! Amazing!!!

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  127. Hi Thenu,

    Is this is your pen name or real name. Your name also sounds sweet like your writing, drawing and many other talents. Where do you live? Just curious. I got to know your blog only through my friend. I am reading ample number of times to pass my time in Dubai. Excellent. Drishti pattu da pooguthu. Do mail in my id about yourself. Just wanted to know about you. I was outside India for the last 29 years and my time spent in reading lots of RC books, several other authors and also english books. RC always reminds me of Mills and Boon books but the indian version.

    So happy to see that there is some one who is having equal talent like her. Or you in anyway related to her. Good luck my personal id is prablakshmi@gmail.com will be happy to be in touch with you. Looking forward to hear from you and waiting to read your next story soon. Good luck

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  128. hi akka nega enaku indha novel ah pdf format la thara mudiyuma plz this is my e-mail id sangeetha.karuna91@gmail.com and i love this novel very much and thanks from heart 2 giving such a beautiful novel.
    Enakum ezhudhanumnu aasai vandhuduchu na idhu varaikum yarukum comments ezhudhunandhu kidaiyadhu i impressed with your writing ,keep on writing ur webpage design also quite nice i'm looking fwd for ur next novel.keep in touch akka.

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  129. Hi thena.....
    Wow super romantic story i lve to read this story. Pls continue to write thena. I' m big fan of rc mam. I m waiting for ur next story......
    All the very best .......

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  130. Hi Thenu,

    nice story, very pleasing to read. As a big fan of RC mam i am very much eager to see ur next romantic story.

    All the best....

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  131. menmayana kaadhal kadhai. arumai

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  132. Superb... Keep up the good work and continue it... Am happy that we have got another person with similar writings of RC

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  133. You are a great writer, I can't read tamil, well but made a lot effort to read it. There is a lot conversation between the hero and heroin. It is beautiful romantic story. You are class of your own. Even RC books can't come close. Pls keep writing.

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  134. I am actually angry with you. After writing such a beautiful love story, you have left us hungry for more. Now we won't know when you will write again. Pls for the sake of your fans do write a another novel soon.

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  135. super love story thanks thenu

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  136. Hi Thenu,

    Thanks Thenu for giving such a good treat for our eyes and memory .The story was completely filled and overflowed with love it showed your passion towards writing and made us to move.Please make us happy and yourself with an other novel soon.

    By Arthi

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  137. Very nice story. I accidentally saw this & started reading. Enjoyed very much. Keep writing
    Rohini
    Colombo

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  138. எதையோ தேடப் போய் பொன் கிடைத்தது என்று சொல்லுவார்களே அது போலே தான் எனக்கும் "இருள் மறைந்த நிழல்"...மிகவும் அருமை..அதிலும் அந்த "நளந்தன்" என்னை மிகவும் ஈர்த்தார் என்றே தான் சொல்ல வேண்டும்...வாழ்த்து சொல்லும் அளவுக்கு நான் ஒன்றும் பெரிய மேதவி அல்ல..ஆனால் மேலும் இது போன்றா நாவால்களை எழுத வேண்டுகிறேன்.... :) :) :)

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  139. such a wonderful story.... sema ponga.... hero heroin varnipathu ena... kathaila ula ethirpaaradha twist everything was ecellent... am studyng 2nd yr... nw nly i start to read buks.. athuvum rc buks 1st tym padichu impress vanthu oru aim oda avanga yella books um padikanumnu netla search panum pothu than unga story patha... thank u so much ka.. really nice story..

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  140. such a wonderful and romantic ending.really love it...you are super...

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  141. After long period, reading a fantastic story.thanks a lot for the perfect story....Now I like...nonononoono...admire that NALANTHAN...PERFECT GENTLEMAN...and Meethuna, she is adorable(character)...HATE that SUBHALA...waiting for your next novel.plssss...I left my office work just bcoz of your story...UNgalukku mathum yeppadi ipadi different a yosikka tonuthu???

    JUST CAN SAY...U R SUPER.....

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  142. Hi thena,
    I loved the novel,very gripping and the way you wrote is fantastic.Keep writing.

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  143. nice + romentic love story. ladys always expect this kind of life partner. mithuna is simply like me. :-)

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  144. Hi sir,
    I read your novel in frist time,.it's very very attract to my heart,UR use the words are very beautyful.my best whishes for you.

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  145. Hi, very very very nice story. I laugh, cry, sad, angry, emotional wif d story. So nice.

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  146. Hi thena, I love this story like RC mam's story 'kathelennum solaille'. mithuna and nalandan are lingering in my mind. nalandan than kadalai solla muyandru mudiyamal pogum idaththilellam, I can't explain my feelings. I love this story very much.

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  147. Hi Thena,

    When will u write the other novel. Every one are eagerly waiting for your second novel. Your novel is so mesmerizing like Illayaraja's music. totally you showered us with your words which can't be forget. we are waiting to be showed more with your new novels.

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  148. thanks for writing and sharing such a beautiful novel. the way u hv handled the words is really superb.

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  149. your story was so nice :)

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  150. HiThenu,
    Excellent story. I enjoyed the story very much.Please write more.

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  151. Hi thenu ,
    Excellent story.I enjoyed the story very much.Please write more.

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  152. unga story'ku ADIMAI AAGITTEN sis....wish u gud luck 4 future n0vels..<3...w0w..! i just cant believe tat itz ur 1st n0vel...keep writing....dont make us to wait 4 a l0ng peri0d...excellent....SUPERB...AMAZING...< no words to say abt ur talentz..>.......JAIHO to u...

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  153. hi really fabulous and gargious love story. u too also written like RC mam. but different way u followed.no words for ur romantic writting. when r u going to write ur next one. i know one real story, i want to tell u.

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  154. Hi Thenu,

    It's is an amazing work, coudn't believe that it is your first story. Very well narrated, citations used, the flow etc. Well done! Keep up the good work.

    Best wishes,
    Ammu

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  155. Hi thenu! Very nice story just can't believe it's ur first story! Please continue ur writing. Waiting for ur next story!

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  156. Good... Nice... Romantic novel..

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  157. i think this is My third Novel which makes me to read novels frequently..this story effect will be in mind for more than a month.. thank u so much..

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  158. hi solla varthai illa romba supera iruku i love this story thanks thenu

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  159. nice story thenu..... :) midhuna nalandhan name is soo nice.... indha kadhata paadhiyila niruthave mudiyila.. full uh padichitu than adutha velaye..... supperbbb lov story thenu.... :) :) epecting more stories like this from you..

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  160. Gr8 story loved reading it. Read it in a single shot

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  161. thenu superb story. no more words to say ya.

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  162. Hi thenu :-)
    i'm a big fan of rc. 1st time net la story paduchen. Remba nalla love story. Hero heroin name la iruthu yellame karpanaikkum yetta varnanai. Padikkum pothu yellam kan mun nilalaadiyathu. Rendu peroda emotion ah alaga sooniga. Enna antha story la erunthu miindu varamudila. Remba nalla irukku. All the best for your next story

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  163. Hai Thenu :-) :-) :-)
    உங்கள் நாவல் படிக்க படிக்க திகட்டவில்லை...எப்பொழுது படித்தாலும் இனிக்கவே செய்கிறது...மிக மிக ரசித்தேன் thenu������ உங்களின் அடுத்த படைப்பையும் எதிர் பார்க்கிறேன் உங்களின் உண்மையான ரசிகையாக....வாழ்த்துக்கள்!!!!!

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  164. Nice Novel...!! Tons of thanks to the Writer..!! Waiting for another cute Love Story..!! Best wishes to the Writer..!! :)

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  165. Hai Thenu,
    Its really a fantastic story. Keep up your good work. Enjoyed well.

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  166. awesome story. endha oru sandegathayum velipadaya ketu thelivu paduthikanum engira karuthai romba azhaga soolirukeenga. excellent job thenu. ovvoru part um padikum bodu anda kaatchi nijamagave nadakra madiri irundadu. hats off to you.................

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  167. awesome story thenu.... enda oru sandehathayum velipadaya ketu thelivu paduthikanum endra karuthai romba azhaga sollirukeenga. ovvor partum padikumbodu, anda kaatchigal nijahil nadakra madiriye irundadu. neenga ororu kaatchiyayum varunithirundadu avlo azhaga irundadu. ungal kaatchi varunanaiku hats off.... keep writing.... waiting to read more of your writings...

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  168. Hi Thenu.. This is Santhya..!!

    Proud to have an amazing Writer from IT field.. Congratulations for the wonderful work and All the best for upcoming cute stories..!! you are Rocking..!! Keep up the Same..!!

    Best Wishes from Santhya Babu :)

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  169. Hi Thenu.....

    amazing Novel...... Just Now I finished reading this novel.....

    I thought I is RC Novel...... Superb....... ALL the BEST for your future stories.....

    Where are the other stories of yours ya....

    Regards,

    Divya

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  170. Thanks Divya! other stories ellam en heart-la irukku. :-P I have to bring them out one by one..pardon me for the delay..

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  171. Thanks Santhya Babu, Indra, Anitha, Angel, Divyadarshini, Divyabarathy, gayathri, Nageswaran, Krishnaveni, Parimalar, Shanthi, Brinda, Madhu, Joey, Manikandan, Archana, Angel, Sumathy, Magi, Amlu, Meena, Nadeeka, lakshmiraj, Rajlakshmi, Tharmika, Deepa, Divya Gurusamy, Barathy Saravanan and All Anonymous! I am very happy to hear from you all. Humbled! Thanks for taking the time to share your valuable comments with me.

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  172. hai
    my frnd suggested me to read this novel..pls keep writing .felt very good...could see the RC effect..but frankly u have outdone some of her novels.:) i liked ur similes...
    ambai between those 2 guys
    his thirukurals requiring konar guides:) my favourite
    his rasanai,keli,kindal
    gramangalil kai korthu sendral udane kalyanamame:)
    kadhala endral "theriyavillai" (very edhartham)
    therinjavangaluku solla thevai illai, theriyadhavangalukku solli prayojanamillai

    ur paintings r excellent...u r a multi-faceted personality
    eagerly waiting for ur next novel.all the best

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  173. Sivaranjani,
    Loved ur comments and thanks for the dialogue recaps. Took me to la-la land. ;-) When readers like you recap it gives me a satisfaction to know the effect of my imaginations.

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  174. VIRUMBUM PODHELLAM PADIKIRAEN
    ENN MANAM NEGZHILKIRAEN

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  175. Dear Thenu,
    very very good novel. Waiting for the next one .
    Please engalukkaga seekirame .
    Thanks,
    PadmaSathish

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  176. Dear Thenu, I recently happened to read Irul Maraitha Nizhal. Is it your novel or RC Madam's novel. Under "Ramanichandran Novel Blogspot" Your "Irul Maraitha Nizhal " novel is coming. original writer of this novel is Ramanichandran Mam.Please confirm.

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  177. Dear Anonymous, Irul maraitha nizhal is written by me. Original writer is Thenu. Thanks for asking.

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  178. Hi thenu,
    I raed the Story in a strentch really superb .
    Its Shows u have raed Rc novel Regulraly too gud keep writing

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  179. awesome story:-):-):-) i ve already read this novel in RC mam's collection and it was one of my favourites. But only today I came to know that u are the REAL WRITER..A gr8 start and plz do continue writing... And priya ka's comments were so good and genuine... Rasika pa:-):-)

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  180. superb story.
    I am waiting for your next story.so pls start it quickly.

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  181. Hi
    Superb story. its my all time fav.story.i am waiting for your next story.so pls start tat quickly.

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  182. Hi,

    If anyone said it is ur first novel -it is very hard to believe, and the way you narrated the whole story is very much impressive and it is gives feel to be in the character itself. Its heart touching and your comments in between conversation of nandhan and mithuna was highlight.

    Thank you for such a wonderfull story and its become one of may favourite also. After RC i like your writing very much.

    Continue the same

    Bharathi M R

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  183. Hi, how did u end up with such a nice love story? Plz do treat us with another story soon. Nandhan and Mithuna U dont believe, These r my kids name ;-) this is another reason i like the story.. But never ever compare u with RC. U r such a wonderful narrator, n dont put urself behind her. she is a love story legend n u r on ur step to that. U be a total individual n give us nice stories like this forever. Though u have her glimpses here n there in ur stories, ur first story is a super duper hit. waiting to read more of ur writings Thenu.. All the best n hearty wishes.

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  184. Such a wonderful story ...waiting for reading more stories eagerly....chance eh illa superb romantic story...

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  185. wow!!!! amazing.... ella unarchigalaiyum alaghai unarthi ... iyalpai ithamai oru kathai... arputham... ovvondraiyum rasithu rasithu eluthi irukeenga... ungal kanavugalum .. ungal valvil nadantha sila nijagalum ithil nichayam idam petru iruvendum.... ungalodu ungal thunaivaraiyum potruhiren... indha padaipirku valzha neengal pallandu.... :-)

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  186. Hai Thenu Superb Story.... Sapdakuda marathuten.... Avlo interest ah ore moochula padichuten.... Thank you for tis story..... Keep rocking..... All the best... Take care��

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  187. Hai Thenu Sister, Story sema Super.... I love it.... Ore Moochula Padichuten...
    Avlo Interesting ah irunthuchu.... Sapdakuda Marathuten..
    Thank you for this story sis, All the best,
    Take care��

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  188. Really Awesome........... Lovely romantic Story...... Hats off to ur Imagination....
    so beautifully writen.i loved it so much.......... thank u for the wonderful story.

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  189. Actually i wont spend time in reading long novels.This is my first novel.I have read more than 20 times.
    the narration was simply superb.
    Waiting for your next novel. awesome......... i loved it
    hatts off

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  190. i came across ur writings now only
    glad to read this pa
    sooooooooo nice nd madhu stayed in my heart
    thank you for a wonderful novel
    i respect ur centiments,romance, twist
    hmmmmmm long time after i read this novel in a single streach
    characters madhu nd naland came in my dreams
    is this a real incident ah pa

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  191. Thanks a lot my dear friends... Your words mean a lot to me. Hinduja, This is not real incident pa, just my imagination. :-) Although I could trace back some traits to personalities that I have come across in life.

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